For the crit I showed the image from my first shoot and explained my idea. There were several key points that were raised:

  • The idea of the implied narrative of found imagery wasn’t communicated clearly in the image, admittedly the image wasn’t presented in the context of an album but because I will have to present it in a gallery/ portfolio context Im not sure my idea will be put across effectively.
  • Would it be better to shoot digitally and then do the post production in photoshop for a more accurate replica or to shoot on an approapriate format with appropiate film media for a more authentic image?